Father’s Gift for My Birthday
My birthday of this year fell on last Friday. My father promised to give me a special gift.
Last Friday morning, Father brought me to a village school in his hometown. The school had just one house with one classroom, which was small with dim light, and all the desks and chairs were made of rough boards. There were only 21 students, most of whom were boys. They were listening to the teacher attentively. The teacher told us, while their study conditions were poor, all the students studied very hard and two from the school even went to university last year.
I was deeply struck by their stories. Not until then did I realize that it was my father’s gift for my birthday!
1.本文体裁是记叙文;时态应以一般过去式为主。
2.不要逐条翻译,注意用各项内容间的衔接。
3.“感想”要有度,不要发挥的太多。
4.注意运用些教高级的表达方式,如:fall on;be made of,be deeply struck by及各种从句。