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  • Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become

    hikers, who are calling Donkey Friends(驴友)in Chinese.A discussion about hiking has∧ held in our

    1. called 2. been

    class.Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people to feel healthier, fresher and

    3. 去掉

    more harmonious with nature.They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature.They can

    4. deeply

    also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the

    5. relaxed

    places people have neverbeen to, and accidents have been happened now and then because ∧poor

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    knowledge of hiking.Some hikers even lost their life .The other students in our class think it not safe

    8. lives

    to organize so dangerous activities.They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers

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    should be trained before they attend the activities.

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