1、I(英文首句第一个单词要大写) 2、 read(read的过去试是原形,但读法不一样)a book last night（夜晚,字母写倒了）. 3、It gave(give的过去试是gave,过去式第三人称不用加s)me a lot of feelings(feel在这里作名词而不是动词) at that moment. 4、The meanings(mean的形容词是meaning)expressed how to pick up young girls. 5、I never smoke and I never angry easyly,(英语的语句习惯一般是前后一至的)and I'm polite to （应该用介词to,表方向,对某人.be polite to sb）anyone.(任何人） 6、So I read that book again and again,there were such meaningful experiences,I learned them hard.(语序,语法,表达应该要更清楚.翻译成：我一遍又一遍地看,有许多有意义的经验,我努力地学着） 7、It isn't only about pick up women(加个词表强调,不仅仅是___和你后面的句子更连惯,意思表达得更清楚) 注意英文中的大小写,过去试,语法语序,希望能够帮到你.