从汉语上看,整段文字有些逻辑不通.
“今天”是不是周五?
这样的汉语直译成英语,很难让人理解.
英语更讲究言简意赅.按照你想表达的意思,这样行不行：
Good morning.
I went to ChangZhou, another city not far away from SuZhou, for business.
Sorry i can not inform you in time, dont be upset about this.
I will be home early on Friday, wondering if you have time at that time.
I am serious about the relationship between you and me.
Trust me!