麻烦给这篇英文小日记挑错误Talk with TimiShe is from Hungary.I know nothin

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  • She is from Hungary. Since I know nothing about Hungary even where it is , I went to look for some articles about it. From the Microsoft Student 2006 I found its map. It is really a quite small country. I also made clear its geographical location from this map. It`s so faraway from China. Compared with China, it seems rather inappreciable. I tell her about the city I live in ,such as the population and the customs. In addition, I shew her some pictures of it. The population of ShanTou is 4,680,000 and its size is 2064 sq.km. She said that it was a big city. But I told her that BeiJing is much larger than ShanTou in size. Much to my surprise, she didn't even know BeiJing at all, the capital of China! Then I told her something about BeiJing and the exciting news that the 2008 Olympic Games would be held in it. Both of us were very proud of it. Then she said Budapest would probably hold the 2012 Olympic Games. However, the country has big financial problem. Moreover, their parliament don't pay much attention to it. She seemed not to like their parliament in some aspects. From her words, I knew that Hungary didn't make an effort and the dissatisfaction of its nationals . I felt pretty lucky to live in China.

    楼主,日记应该有固定格式的,别忘记在最上方写下日期和天气哦.

    你还是能够较清楚表达自己的意思,但由于词汇及语法上的束缚,还有待提高.建议有空多背背词汇手册,多看看原版小说之类的,但要选择适合你自己的.

    努力吧,MAY YOU SUCCEED!