I want to be a doctor when I grow up.Because I think doctors are very good ,great and useful.Doctors can bring us happy and everyone likes doctors very much.So I want to be a doctor when I grow up.
这个应该可以吧,偶也不知道有没有语法错误,你是初一吧,偶也是,这个偶在同步训练上看见过了,可是我们不用做的.
看在偶也是初一的份上,设我为最佳答案吧.