i'm afraid you should leave me.please,leave me.i don't deserve you.it's nessary for you to fly to see me .you know,it's no need to do so.otherwise,it will cost you much money.please,give me up.i feel very sorry.i'm not the one who will be with you in the end.sorry.
你是要和外国男友分手是吧?对方帅不帅啊?随便问一下.
我贴心地为你加上了第一句,这会使对话更真诚,接下来就递进,直截了当,让他无法拒绝.you know 那里停顿一下,让他觉得你很诚恳,只有分手能解决问题.sorry的那个地方语气缓慢,温柔,为自己的行为感到遗憾,但又改变不了,言语中中更透露着希望对方以后能找到更好的她,并对他满怀信心和鼓舞,让他感动.
我只是初二学生,有什么语法问题希望你能帮我指出,这也是我学习的过程.