帮我看看这英语作文有哪些地方有问题~

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  • Today we found out many kinds of disease. (diseases)

    They made our body not health.(unhealthy)

    Although maybe we will die of them . (We will even die because of them)

    So we need find some ways to help our body health. (keep healthy)

    Wemust pay attention to our body whenever. (We must) (all the time)

    If there is anything strange. (seems strange)

    You must cure it at first time. )

    Don't drink the water not boiling. ( which isn't boiled)

    Dirty water is easy to make you feel not well.(Dirty water could make you feel unwell easily.)

    Don't eat food that over the time. (passed the best day before)

    Some food that over the timecould let you get disease. (You will contract disease from some of the overdates food)

    Be sure that your dishes and bowls are clean. ( Make sure)

    Before your meal,washing hands,keep these habits above,the diseases must far away from you!)