e reduced 被减少
但这里不应该是被动语态,非人为造成的,而是干旱等自然因素,应用主动式.
旧的新闻可以看到:气象局:鄱阳湖洞庭湖因干旱面积减少约2/3
Poyang lake and Dongting lake's area
为何只有Dongting lake用所有格而Poyang lake不用?
最好说成 the area of Poyang lake and Donting lake
所以建议改为:
The area of Poyang lake and Donting lake has reduced by two thirds by 2011.