请按照高考的要求帮我批改一下这篇作文.假定你是李华.应英国朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况.内容须包

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  • has been opened to us => has been open to us

    I love reading..., stay there reading... there are TWO verbs in one simple sentence!

    especially in library => in the library / in libraries

    environment to read => reading environment

    at one time => you mean "once"?

    with books are sorted out by subject => with books sorted out by subjects

    to the place where supports lend survice => to the check out desk; also there are more than one verbs in your sentence!

    Opened on Monday => Open on Monday

    Closed at weekend => Closed at weekends

    reading in library => in the library