Question

请高手帮忙看一下我的这封回信有没有什么问题,语法上的,或是单词拼写上的,或是用词不当的地方.

Answer 1

Thank you for your letter.

I will feel quite honoured if I can be a member of WCC.In addition,the most of the application materials have been finished.And the application and homestay application fees will be paid recently ,and I will send the application materials as soon as possible.

Thank you very much.

Yours Sincerely,

Fanny

p.s.不要每句话都是 i will 开头,很单调