Question

英文短文纠错,一共十个错,有多词的,有少词的,可能还有时间形式的错误,麻烦各位英语达人了~

Answer 1

Dear Bob:

Thanks（加上for) writing and introducing your beautiful city to me.Now I'd like to tell you anything (anything改为something)about my hometown PingChang,which stand(stand改为stands） on the bank of the Bahe River.

It is a beautiful city for people to live（加上in）.Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past 10 years.Now factories,houses and roads have （加上been）built.More schools and hospitals are serving（serving改为in serve或are serving改为serves）