Last Saturday 1 went to the library as usually . At about noon, I was enjoying my readingusual
near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened . when heard
happening shocked
I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were
people
standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I
pushed through the crowd as Itook off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back andto safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.my
I was proud
what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is inneed. of
小题1:as usual正如往常 固定短语
小题2:while 引导的从句中，谓语动词应是延续性动词。
小题3:时态前后应一致。
小题4:happen是不及物动词，不能用被动
小题5:我感到惊讶，应用shocked
小题6:people是一个集体名词，始终表示复数概念。解释为“民族”时，才可以用单复数形式。
小题7:take off 的动作与push 的动作同时发生，不用过去完成时
小题8:这里是并列的动作，没有转折关系。
小题9:本文是以第一人称写的，故用to my great relief.
小题10:be proud of +n. 或名词性从句