Question

求英语牛人改错According to the deep analyse of the poster,there are

Answer 1

According to the deep analyse of the poster 用错字,analyse 是动词 应用analysis

所以 deep analyse 应改为 in depth analysis (深入的分析)

there are more details will be shown in the appendix 2.

改为:more details will be shown in the appendix 2.

或可:there will be more details shown in the appendix 2.