请各位帮忙看下这篇英文短信有没有什么语法,格式等之 - 知识问答

请各位帮忙看下这篇英文短信有没有什么语法,格式等之类的错误,有的话请指出,虚心求教.谢谢!

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I'm an 18-year-old ,who is a girl from xxCity,xxProvince,China.应该为
I'm an 18-year-old girl who is from xxCity ,xxProvince in China.
I am totally fall in love with it and your excellent performance 中去掉am,fall改为 fell,
At this time of "the" Spring Festival
to greeting each other中greeting应改为greet
may you success 改为may you succeed或may you make success
英语信件中一般不用farewell.多用些祝福的话语,如Best wishes!等、

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