如果你想表达
树枝在微风中轻柔的摆动,光线穿过树叶间狭窄的空隙在人行道上投下斑驳的影子.
那这样比较好- The branches were gently swaying in the breeze,shadowing the sidewalk as bundles of light passed through tiny spaces among the leaves.
要是准我多改的话,我会愿意这么说-The branches were gently swaying in the breeze,making small jumping shadows on the sidewalk as bundles of light penetrates the leaves.呵呵,多扯几句别介意