1、hair不可数,不能用hairs.
2、She is a little fat后面应该用逗号.
3、Her favourite food,不是she favourite food.
4、14 years old,不是14 year‘s old
5、and she sings的and不用大写且前面应该用逗号.
6、She wants to be,不是She want to be.
7、We all like her,不用加are.
1、hair不可数,不能用hairs.
2、She is a little fat后面应该用逗号.
3、Her favourite food,不是she favourite food.
4、14 years old,不是14 year‘s old
5、and she sings的and不用大写且前面应该用逗号.
6、She wants to be,不是She want to be.
7、We all like her,不用加are.