整篇文章写得很好,没有多少语法错误.但下面两个句子可以稍作改动,就更好了.
I don’t like to study really hard,此句中really 的位置不当.可改成:
I don’t really like to study hard.
But at the same time I don’t want my parents and teachers feel disappointed as well.此句中
的but用得不是很准确.but是并列连词,一般放在第二个分句前,与第一个分句构成并列句,
but 不能用于一个句子的开头.可改成:However.
另外,want sb.to do sth.是固定搭配,因此feel前应加上to.
However,at the same time I don’t want my parents and teachers to feel disappointed as well.