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  • i'm xxx,19 years old who studying in school now.I live in Yanta with my father、my mother and my sister.We are happiness.

    i'm introverted and my mood is easily be influenced governed by outside.And also I'm always ready to help.So I've got a lot of friends who give me a lot of fun.

    I have a good few hobbies.For example,football,basketball,sleeping,reading,play computer,listening to the music,history and so on.

    My favorite sport is running.If you running in a good weather in the morning ,you'll feel very happy and relax.Running can keeping your health well while having fun.When you're running,you'll pulling fresh air and it can make you feel comfortable.Then you'll without any trouble.Although I don't running often but I can understand that running is good for people's health.Dear friends,let's run for our health together!