My classmate,Joseph,is at present in hospital with a breaking（改为broken） leg.He was walking to school the other day while（改为when） a bicycle ran into him.He never watched（改为watches） where he is going,so he often gets into trouble.But he is having a nice time there.He has a comfortable room,patiently(改为patient) nurses,and a great deal of times(改为time) to read .Some friends of hers （改为his）go to see him every day,and they bring him lots of good books and fresh fruit（改为fruits）.He hasn't been fallen behind （加others）because he is busy study(改为studying) what he has missed in class.The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital in（加a） few weeks.
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