求英语高手帮我改英文作文!Dear.Shen yongming,Today,we watched a Cartoon c

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  • Dear.Shen yongming,

    Today,we watched a Cartoon called Ratatouille.The story talks about a rat named Remy who dreams of becoming a great French chef despite his family's wishes and the obvious problem of being a rat in a decidedly rodent-phobic profession.

    In the end ,Remy changed his life.

    After watching the cartoon .I won't forget what Remy achieved.The feeling's so strong and lasts for so long.There is something left in my head .

    Now i`ll just write my own feelings about

    In my opinion,i think that the music in the is very beautiful and the filn quality is pretty good!

    I also think Remy is very cute,I do love him.Now I think Remy is a hero in my life!For example,Remy said "I've always believed with hard work and a little bit of luck,it's only a matter of time before I'm discovered!" It moved to me so strongly!After that ,I felt hopeful,and I also think I can be successful in the future!

    From now on,I will do the same thing as Remy did.

    Don't be shy,just try.

    I enjoy losing face.

    I enjoy being embarrassed.

    I enjoy being laughed at.

    I enjoy being made fun of.

    I enjoy making mistakes.

    I enjoy learning from my mistakes!

    The more mistakes I make,the more progress I make!

    Try to make as many mistakes as possible!

    Try to lose face as much as possible!

    Try to make people laugh as much as possible!

    Try to be embarrassed as much as possible!

    Try to make progress as much as possible!

    Start to make mistakes and lose face today!

    That's the only way to success!

    I think I will be successful !I can do everything!I can play !I wanna be NO.1

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