帮我修改一下这篇作文,Nowadays more and more students turn a cold back

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  • Nowadays more and more students turn a cold back to spelling .(于是无不太懂“turn a cold back”是啥意思..)

    And such a phenomenon almost sweeps every university .

    Now[,] let me explain [some] factors of this phenomenon and offer my view on it.

    First,the goal of most students to learn English is to [use it as a communication tool by speaking] or just to pass the test(注意单复数,还有最好写清楚什么test,或者直接用exams/model exams),of which multiple choices take up the major proportion [of the English testpapers].

    Besides ,the wide use of electronic devices such [as] e-dictionaries and computers(额咋觉得这俩是一样物质呢..乃可以用"use e-dictionary to look for words"和"put right spelling mistakes in computers"这样的说法来区别) may be another important [cause].

    By using those tools,students [are] no longer [required to] correct the [words spelling] by themselves.

    As a result [of them,这个改动乃可以不采纳,只是觉得读起来有点拗口..],spelling seems not that important [in today's education].

    As far as I am[have,乃用的是被动..]concerned,[I believe] we [shouldn't,“cannot”感觉语气太强烈] emphasize the importance of spelling [so] much.[Due attention should be given to spelling immediately because writing [is still] a way to communicate all the time.]

    [Also,] not spelling correctly means we can not get our ideas cross to others freely.