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  • Various Dreams

    First of all,I'd like share you the results of an investigation that I did a few days ago.the question was “What is your dream?”

    the first one,Niconic from DP1 said “I dreamed of being the most superb and unique guitar player in the world!” the second one,Stephanie from the class next door said she wished to be a rich lady with her smile.Another girl,who's much older than me asked “Sharing happiness with others,is that a dream?” I was surprised,then i told her loud and clear “Absolutely!Why not?” And the very last one,he said “I want to be a cartoonist; I want to be a cartoonist who can educate the world; I want to be a cartoonist who can pull the Chinese cartoon fraternity together!” This guy sits in front of me and he is very very interested in drawing,including drawing himself.He is our Alan,from pre_year10_1.

    That’s right!We are at the age of dreaming.no matter what kind of dreams we have is not important.What's important is that you should have your own dream.Some of them could be splendid; others could be tiny and peaceful as well.maybe most of us couldn't remeber what our dreams really were in the future,neither could I.But now,as a pre_year10 student in DP ,it is the right time to have dreams.Dreams are the power of life.Do you have such an experience that you want to do something with your best or make the wishes become true?That is a kind of dream that you may never realize,and it only exists for a very short period,but it could give you courage you need!That’s the power of living a better life.

    But how should we make the dream come true?Basically,you should be independent,and optimistic.Well,later in my life I know that i'll make it happen.Life is not always easy for everybody.Only by working hard and being fearless of failure,you can overcome difficulties to make your dreams come true.

    just like the popular saying ,“no pain,no gain.” Bring your dreams up and work it our in the following days.You will succeed some day,and appreciate for dreams that belongs to you only!

    改了不少地方,因为没办法改颜色,所以lz只好将就点慢慢看了