错别字太多了.
I helped an old woman
Last Sunday, I went to Lianhua mountain. On the way, I saw an old woman crying. What happened? I walked to her and asked. The old woman said "My dog is missing. I am looking for it everywhere, but I couldn't find it". I thought I should help her, so I didn't go to Lianhua mountain. I asked her, "When did you miss your dog?" She said "It was at 3:00p.m., now it's 3:30PM, so I think my dog is not far awary from me." I asked again, "What's the color of your dog?" "My dog is black." "OK! Let's find it out."
Finally, we found the dog. It was nearly 5:00p.m.. I had to go home, so I said to the old woman "You've found your dog, and I have to go home now.Take good care of you. Goodbye!” The old woman said "Thank you! Goodbye!”
I think everyone should help the people in need.
我就简单改了一下.
moutian 是不是指的mountain?
还有goodbey 应该是goodbye吧?
我还擅自修改了一点,你自己看看吧,合适就留着.
提个建议：以后你用文本些英语文章的时候,注意标点符号都要用半角,全角一般只有中文和日文使用.而且,半角的标点符号之后需要加一个空格,像句号、逗号、引号（是关闭的引号）叹号、问号后面.