Question

There is very much time I didn’t write you,and now I have a

Answer 1

第一句：

There is a very long time I didn’t write to you

time有修饰语,前家a ,write to you 加to

第二句：

（therefore去掉 ）,mind on 去on 、mind是及物动词

第三句：

how is it改为how it is 宾语从句用疑问词+主+谓语 ,stay closed 为stay close(ly)

sun加the The sun为固定词语

第四句：

among walls为against walls,对着墙

（sometimes 去掉）

第五句：

looking为watching ：watch sb.doing

lodging为lodge 小屋

第八句：

angry to me 为angry at me

两个（**）为可去可不去掉