I am an ordinary college student in Jiangsu Province,China.I chose a college in my hometown because of a lot of factors. Most of my classmates live in the dormitories while I live in my home. In every morning, I must get up at 6:30.Then,it will takes me 45 minutes to the college by bike.There are four lessons in the morning.After lunch,I get the only chance to chat with my classmates.The lessons in the afternoon will be finished at 3:30.
It will be 4:30 when I get back home. Then,I try to learn something about English and computer.After supper,I will do some reading.I think the life is very tedious.And I feel a little lonely.
建议楼主掌握下定冠词的用法,发现你基本上都要用the,这不是个好习惯.你的句式用的都比较简单,就不帮你一一改正,毕竟这是你的文章.