蒽、作文如下：
Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China.The most famous is west lake,of course,it has many other places of historic interest,too.
Last week,I took train to visit Hangzhou,where I climbed in the "gem mountain" ,and saw the sunrise.It is really beautiful that the sun rised at that moment,Later I went to the west lake rowed a boat,and then ,I saunter on the way for two hours of park.Finally,I felt a little tired,but I was very happy,and this is a good memory,life is unforgettable.
同学,我当初也是对英语很郁闷的,但我后来一直在努力学,所以才在高考时得了94分.你要相信自己,作文只要你多读,多写,多积累,就会有回报的.所以,你不要怕写作文,总有一天你会让作文怕你的.