A:Hi,Peggy what are you looking at?B:This is my idol,A:your idol?Hum… she is very handsome /beautiful,but I don’t recognize her.Is she /he Mary B:no,she is Lily A:Lily,does she come from Hong Kong B:no,she/he comess from China A:on!I see.She is a Chinese singer B:yes!A:which is her famous song?B:hum…she /he has many songs,and the most famous one is apple .Have you heard of it?A:yes.I did.I remembered that song won the prize.B:do you like it?A:yes.I like it very much!Did she sell any record?(个人觉得出唱片呢个词用record比较好） B:yes.she has more than three records,and I also have two records of her.A:He looks very young.Does she/he married?B:yes A:I seen to have seen him on the movie.have him played any movies?我好以在电影上见过他,他有没有拍过任何的电影 B:yes/no.he/she played cats A:She is wonderful.Have She performed any concerts?B:yes.she gave one in April,2008.帮你改左,不过入边噶she/he就你自己定啦.
帮我看看我的文法对不对还有,帮我把有中文字的地方转成英文,一定要文法对~A:Hi,Ppeggy what are you