求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q

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  • 本来要列1234...条条的,但是i列到第3条发现,咋说呢,语法错误,有些措辞不到位,还有些会赘余.你应该是按照汉语逐词翻译的,所以我就通篇改了,如果哪点有疑问,可以发问哈?

    Do you know why you’re sick ? A lot of people have some kinds of psychological problems. If you fail to solve these problems, they are very likely to turn to some various physical or psychological diseases. So in this condition,you would be ill.

    Why do people have so many mental problems ? Because people's pressure in modern society becomes more and more.

    There are several ways to get over mental problems and keep psychological health .Firstly you should find why these problem exist . Secondly, you can go wherever you like to have a trip .Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk your problems to your partners, relatives and friends, or you can seek support and advice from a psychologist.