有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~

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  • First I want to tell you ,that we can learn together I feel very happy.As you can see ,I was a transfer student.Although I failed(因为是过去式) in my senior entrance examination,but it(代指failure) did not bring me down,I'm not a loser.

    My teacher once told me:'when you have choices,choose the best.When you have no choices,do your best.'(顺便提一句,我喜欢你们老师这句话!)

    So I have to do my best.

    Well,let's hark back to the topic.

    I'm an outgoing girl.I love all the things I like.(我总觉得“我爱所有我喜欢的东西”,这句话是废话.不过你喜欢的话也可以加上)My favorite color is green.Because it represents new and flesh.Also,I love music,especially country music,so I like Taylor Swift very much.

    Finally,I want to say,I can bear to suffer a big failure.But I will stage a comeback in the end.( 东山再起~我喜欢)

    Hope we can get alone happy.

    Thank you for listening to my self introduction.