Wish every couple will love each other forever.Even we are thousands miles apart ,the moon can tell me your yearn.
--楼主是不是学英文学傻了,完全变成翻译式英语了?前一句只有两种最简洁最有力的表达.一是love forever ,二never part.
后一句,肯定得要moon 出来说话,让它活起起.moon can tell ,or hear the moon tell,or moon pass our words