If I become a doctor,I will try my best to make my patience happy.
Since I was 5 years old,I always have a dream,becoming a doctor.Because I was really sick during that period,I feel so terrible,my body temperature is so high.But that doctor always gave me a sweet smile which make me feel better.Since then,I want to be a doctor like him who could understand patient's pain and make them happy.
差不多吧.词可能稍微多了点.大概100来.问题应该不大的.
如果要再写的好一点.那你再发问就是了.