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  • Music,like vitamin to our life,is the soul elixir.One will never be lonely when accompanied by music.Boating in the lake of music we may find comfort and peace because it calms our erratic souls down.No matter what kind of music it is,classical,religious,pop,heavy metal,rock,electronic,jazz,basket,the feeling it gives us will never be the same when it goes off in our mind.Let's turn on your player and free your soul for a while.I am a music fan for myself.Whenever I'm tired,I share vibes with my partner.It calms me down,sometimes rose me up from deep depression.One magic of the music is it never disappear.For me,it is warmth,saving,passion,and hope.I am glad,without a full understanding to every piece of music though,to enjoy the happiness it gives me.Joy and pain in our heart,when listening to music,are all gone.You will find yourself busy hiking the mountains of scales and volumn.

    你原来的文章都是汉语思维写的英语句子,这里我都修改了一下,