评价一下这篇英语大作文Some people think that a sense of competition in

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  • As to the problems suggested above,some people argue that a certain extent of competition among children should be encouraged while others don't think so.They hold that co-operation rather than competition are vital element that can make children a better student.As far as I am concerned,these twofactors are both necessary for chidren.

    Ever since we remain as an elementary student,we were taught the notion of competition.Our teachers and parents ever and ever again imparted the truth that if you don't work hard ,you will be lagged down far away from others andlooked down upon by them ..Exactly under the influence by their words,Those children who have this feeling tend to peform much better than the rest of theirsin many subjects such as P.E,Math,and history.Owing to this,sprit of competitiveness can not be overstated in their eyes.,Then when it comes to the collective development led by personal progress,It is believed that if everyone had became competitive in school,the quality and level of the class would soar up.Therefore,we should teach children a sense of competition because competiton would greatly advance children's abilties in many aspects.