Question

开学了要参加一个英语演讲比赛,内容是杨澜的申奥演讲稿,我自己写了个开场白,请各位帮我改改~比如时态啊,语法什么的~

Answer 1

以下是我个人的一些看法及修改：

I think every Chinese should remember 2008, since it was the year that the 29th Olympic Games was held in Beijing; and I believe that this memorable event will always be a pride of China and every Chinese. After the Beijing Olympic Games, there are more and more foreigners who want to come to China or even work heret; through which we can see how important the Olympic is and how lucky we are.

( We could get this chance, one important reason is that yanglan gave people in Moscow a perfect speech 11 years ago. )这句话不太清楚你想表达什么,所以不知道如何修改